There for the Hatch

by Richard Jordan


Standing at this secluded spot along 
Green River for the first time in thirty 
years. There’s still shadbush dangling 

over the water, its small, white petals 
dropping, whisked away on the current 
toward the falls. I’m with my old fishing 

buddy, Mike. This is his favorite stomping 
ground, but these days, he is gaunt, has 
clouded eyes. I know better than to pry 

& anyway, he’d only say to focus on 
the trout. All last night that’s what we did, 
spent hours talking rainbows, browns 

& brookies, as caddisflies hovered thick 
around our cabin’s porch light. Now Mike 
asks me to select my finest imitation fly. 

No doubt that’s the elk hair with pearl tinsel. 
I tie it to his line then look upstream & spot 
a rise ring. There’s a big one, Mike, I say, 

pointing. No, he says. First crack at it 
is yours. He hands me his rod then backs 
away, gives me space. No pressure, he adds. 

Loud laugh. Don’t hook your hat. That’s Mike. 
I land the cast exactly where it needs to be, 
between a fallen log & boulder just past 

the widening ring. Sight fixed on the drift, 
I inhale deep. Oh, yes, Mike says. Get a load 
of that shadbush. Let’s have ourselves a day.


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